I have not followed through on the poem a day site at NaPoWriMo although I love poetry and keep following and reading the work of some excellent writers there.
I have been writing still, not poetry, but that other writing challenge going on at CampNaNoWriMo, and if you want the info and the links to all those challenges, they are in the last post that I put up here.
Without editing, I am working to stretch a few ideas into my third Duffy Barkley Novel, and some days hating it and some days having fun with it. The reason the challenge works for me is that it tells me its ok to go ahead and write crap on the days it isn't working, because by just showing up at the keyboard, even when it isn't fun, I will eventual find that zone where the ideas flow and it is fun
So here is a sample of what I have come up with there again. Have a sip of tea and see if you can enjoy the story snippet.
“You
remember the first time I was here and my little sister was injured
and I was worried about getting back to her?” She nodded even
though she had never met Izzy. His return to earth had altered his on
timeline so that Izzy had never been injured, but it had not effected
Uhrlin, so here they still shared Duffy's memories of what had
happened and what he had told them during his first visit, the first
time he was nine.
“Well
Izzy is missing, and my Great-Aunt, . . .”
“Margaret?”
“Yes.
They've been gone three days. I was hoping they were with you.”
Aunt Peg had been in Uhrlin as a young girl, before she commonly used
the nickname, Peggy.
Oh-oh-ing
and Smelter and the other older generation in Uhrlin still remembered
her fondly but Oh-oh-ing was shaking her head. “No. I am afraid we
have not seen them.” When she saw Duffy's shoulders droop, and his
face go slack, she put a finger under his chin and tipped his head so
he was looking into her eyes. “You found our missing Princess, and
you helped clear a great woman's name from the charge of treason. If
you have been brought back here, then they are probably here. Uhrlin
is large but you have friends to help you with all that you must do.”
Duffy
sighed, “It is hard to always be the one who has to ask for help,
the one who has to do the undoable things, the cripple with a task
that seems to have no place to start.”
Oh-oh-ing's
eyes gave him sympathy, but no mercy. “Of course it is hard to be
you Duffy, it is hard to be anyone. We all have our burdens and the
times when the energy to make the effort seems impossible. Then we
keep making the effort until we die and our children keep on in our
place.”
“Oh,
thanks a lot!” he muttered sarcastically.
“You
are welcome.” She answered sincerely. He looked up in time to see
her mouth twist into a smile that was part amused, part sympathetic
but wholly without unkindness. Then she used both of her hands to
push her mane back from the sides of her face and when she dropped
her hands to his shoulders again her face was serious.
“I
don't know what we do next,” Duffy said, with nevertheless, a bit
more hope than before he had been reminded that he wasn't alone.
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